Writing Progressions 1P:
I am learning to
- add some detail to my writing
- choose words to make my writing more interesting
We wrote about about a Kapa Haka Performance that we watched in the auditorium during Māori Language Week. First we wrote 2 sentences and then the next day we added some more writing to make our stories more interesting.
"I like to write about Mrs Koroa and my mummy and my daddy and my brother and my sister and my nana. I am learning to use the alphabet card. When I need help I can ask my teacher or mr friends."
Evalei
1 comment:
You are developing good writing habits E. Keep working hard as you have a great imagination.
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